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Post by HoennMaster on Jan 17, 2006 7:33:48 GMT -5
Wow......
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Post by PokéMaster on Jan 22, 2006 12:36:36 GMT -5
Nice
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Post by X626 on Jan 28, 2006 0:50:28 GMT -5
Chapter 13: The End of the Beginning
The elders all gathered around the girl and Ashura appraoched Nao.
"You really want to send her back, don't you?" Nao questioned. "I do, but I just know that something bad will happen to her if we leave her alone." Ashura admitted. "I don't doubt your decision Ashura-sama." Nao replied.
Ashura went back to the girl where the elders began focussing their energy. A light began to surround her body and she opened her eyes a little.
"Don't worry, we'll protect you." Ahura promised.
The girl smiled and she fell back asleep. The elders had finished their job and told Ashura that he would now have to come with them and learn to become a proper ruler.
"What do you mean proper? His decision was better than anything you guys ever made!" one Mew protested.
Everyone watched as more Mews gathered around and protested. The council was forced to let Ashura do as he pleased and take his place as a ruler, despite the fact that he was so young, or risk starting a war. Ashura thanked everyone. The girl eventually woke up, not remembering anything of her human life. All of the Mews decided to give her a name they could call her, it was Elisa. Elisa became a member of the Mew society and lived happily with them. Even though she had no powers, it was hard to tell whether or not she a Mew in disguise. Ashura asked that everyone treat him as a regular Mew without acting like he was important, and everyone seemed to agree. Nao and the others continued to watch over him as he grew up. Since no more problems aroused, Ashura was never needed to make an ultimate decision. He eventually mated with Aemi, who gave birth to a son and a daughter. Unfortunately, Aemi did not survive this. After his son and daughter hatched, Ashura realized he didn't want to raise them alone, and in the paradise. He took them back to the human world, telling Nao and the others to contact him if necessary. Disguised as his normal human self, Ashura returned to the one person he had loved before, Misty. Though she wasn't Ashura's children's true mother, she helped Ashura raise them until they were old enough to disguise themselves as humans too. Ashura found himself once again loving Misty, and vice versa. Ashura did occasionally take his children back to the paradise to play with the others. Elisa grew up and never wanted to leave. She became what one might call the Nurse Joy of the paradise. In the end, everyone turned out to live a happy life.
The end!
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Post by Mstrgmr on Jan 28, 2006 7:13:08 GMT -5
Great story!
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Post by PokéMaster on Jan 28, 2006 11:56:25 GMT -5
A short yet good story!
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Post by X626 on Jan 28, 2006 13:07:29 GMT -5
I said in the first page that it was going to be short.
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Post by HoennMaster on Jan 28, 2006 17:56:21 GMT -5
it was awesome!
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Post by X626 on Jan 29, 2006 3:56:58 GMT -5
I may or may not post a special for this fic, it depends really on how I feel later. The special would involve how Misty helps Ashura take care of his son and daughter. It involves Misty trying to earn the respect of the mischevious duo, and her eventually succeeding.
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Post by HoennMaster on Jan 29, 2006 11:41:12 GMT -5
I hope you do write a special
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Post by PokéMaster on Jan 29, 2006 19:19:45 GMT -5
Me too
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