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Post by PokéMaster on Nov 16, 2005 20:13:29 GMT -5
Can't wait for more! And I fixed an error. You put "Ash grew nervous until he heard Zack's last sentence." when it should have been "Ash grew nervous until he heard Anthony's last sentence."
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Post by X626 on Nov 22, 2005 1:07:51 GMT -5
Chapter 13: Battle of Old Rivals! Ash vs. Gary
Ash and Gary stood in the middle of the street ready to battle. The townspeople began to gather around, anxious to see two of their town's heroes battle each other.
"I won't go easy on you." Ash warned. "I wouldn't want anything less." Gary said.
Brock decided to be the judge of the match.
"This is going to be interesting." Zack pointed ot. "I just hope Gary knows what he's doing against Ash." Misty added.
Gary called out his Arcanine.
"Okay then, I choose you Dragonite!" Ash called.
A Dragonite came out of the pokeball and Gary was in shock.
"When did you get a Dragonite?" Gary gasped. "When Lance wouldn't leave me alone until I caught a Dratini and rasied it. I'm his successor, so he wanted me to have his favorite pokemon." Ash answered.
Arcanine charged at Dragonite with Extreme Speed. Dragonite held out its arms and held Arcanine back.
"Bad move." Ash remarked.
Ash told Dragonite to use Hyper Beam, which knocked out Arcanine in one hit. Gary called it back and sent out Umbreon. Ash called Dragonite back and sent out Pikachu. Umbreon used Faint Attack on Pikachu, and managed to hit him. Ash smirked and told Pikachu to use Iron Tail on Umbreon, which was now right next to Pikachu. In one strike, Umbreon was out too. Gary called Umbreon back and sent out Blastoise. Ash told Pikachu to return and sent out Charizard.
"Use Hydro Pump now!" Gary ordered. "Dodge it!" Ash shouted.
Charizard dodged the attack and now hovered in the air.
"All right Charizard, let's show off your new move. Use Pheonix Strike!" Ash exclaimed. "Pheonix Strike?" everyone wondered.
Charizard flew high up into the air dove staight towards Blastoise. It began spinning around and using Flamethrower at the same time. Soon the fire was caught in the circulation and Charizard appeared like a flaming beast. Charizard slammed into Blastoise's chest, knocking it out in one hit.
"I see, Ash combined a bunch of different attack to produce one of his own creation. Impressive!" Zack realized. "The battle is officially over, Ash wins!" Brock announced.
Gary called back Blastoise.
"I knew I wouldn't win, but I never imagined I'd lose that badly." Gary sighed. "Don't be so hard on yourself, you're a great trainer. But as you can see, I'm no longer that overconfident little boy who was always one step behind you." Ash said. "You're right Ash, and I'm glad to have once been your rival." Gary replied.
The two of them shook hands. Suddenly a voice called out from the sky to Ash.
"Hey Ash, we need your help right away!" the voice announced. "What is it Lance?" Ash wondered.
To be continued...
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Post by PokéMaster on Nov 22, 2005 8:43:00 GMT -5
Wow! That was awesome!
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Post by Mstrgmr on Nov 22, 2005 14:59:57 GMT -5
Great! Dragonite is awesome!
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Post by X626 on Nov 23, 2005 1:08:03 GMT -5
Well, now you've all gotten a glimpse of Ash's strength as a trainer. You'll see more as the fanfic progresses. Also, if Ash is that strong, imagine Zack at his fullest.
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Post by Mstrgmr on Nov 23, 2005 7:13:42 GMT -5
That should be amazing!
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Post by PokéMaster on Nov 23, 2005 8:49:02 GMT -5
Wow!
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Post by X626 on Nov 26, 2005 3:19:18 GMT -5
Chapter 14: Ash Takes His Leave
After Lance told him the situation, Ash agreed to leave with him.
"I'm sorry everyone, but I'm going to have to leave you again." Ash apologized.
Everyone was a little upset that Ash had to leave them again, especially Misty. Ash stopped at Professor Oak's first and said good bye to all of his pokemon. Oak thanked him for letting him examine Lugia while Ash was in town.
"Don't thank me, thank Lugia." Ash smiled. "Ah, well then, thank you Lugia." Oak said.
Lugia nodded his head and Ash told him to meet him at the front of the town in a few minutes.
"It was nice seeing you again Ash." Oak said. "Likewise professor." Ash replied.
Pikachu and Eevee told him something.
"They say bye as well." Ash said.
Oak pet both of them and his good bye. After saying good bye to Tracey and Gary, Ash ran off towards the town's entrance.
"Hey Zack, we could use your help, mind coming along?" Ash asked. "Sure." Zack decided. "Well then, we should get going." Lance announced.
Ash raised his hand in the air and Lugia landed next to them. Ash told Zack, Pikachu, and Eevee to hop on. Ash walked over to Misty.
"Ash I..." Misty started.
Ash quickly grabbed Misty and kissed her.
"Don't think I'll ever forget about you. I'll see you and Anthony both at the Pokemon League. When that time comes, I won't run away." Ash told her.
Ash let her go and hopped on Lugia. Misty watched as Ash and the others took off into the sky.
"I just remembered why I fell in love with that jerk." Misty sighed.
Ash quickly turned towards Lance.
"Hey Lance, mind if we take a short detour?" Ash wondered. "Sure." Lance agreed.
Meanwhile, Anthony had finally left Cerulean City to continue his journey.
To be continued...
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Post by Mstrgmr on Nov 26, 2005 9:26:49 GMT -5
Awesome!
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Post by PokéMaster on Nov 26, 2005 13:22:35 GMT -5
That was brilliant!
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