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Post by HoennMaster on Apr 20, 2006 21:00:54 GMT -5
Agree
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Post by X626 on Apr 30, 2006 3:23:34 GMT -5
Chapter 81: Return to the Island
Zack spent the next couple weeks training Anthony, and noticed that he wasn't making too much progress. However, Anthony had managed to capture a Mankey, Fearow, and Sandshrew through all of his hard work. These pokemon could provide Anthony assistance later, but now. Zack then remembered what day it was.
"I completely forgot, I promised to pay them a visit today!" Zack remembered, smacking himself in the forehead.
Zack looked at Anthony and could tell how badly he wanted to get stronger.
"I'll take him." he decided.
Zack told Anthony to head to the beach and wait for him. Zack went to see Misty and told her what he was doing. She had no objections to the plan. He soon arrived at the beach carrying a wind surfboard.
"What's that for?" Anthony asked. "You'll see..." Zack smirked.
Zack placed it down in the water and got onto it.
"Get on." he told Anthony.
Anthony got and held on tightly to Zack, with his Pikachu holding onto him. Zack's Pikachu got up at the front end of the board. Zack called out his Mew, who got at the back end.
"Let's go!" Zack announced.
Mew let out a powerful Hyper Beam attack, and the group sped out to the ocean. After travellign for a good while, they arrived in an area with a powerful storm. Anthony began to freak out, but Zack told him to relax. They halted to a stop a little while later.
"It's me Zack, and I've brought Ash's son with me!" Zack shouted. "His son? Well then, we'll have to allow him passage." a voice replied.
Anthony wondered what was going as the group suddenly passed through a barrier and were at a nice calm island.
"Where are we?" Anthony wondered. "This is Legendary Isle, a place where I was raised. Also, it's going to be the site of your training." Zack replied.
Chapter 82: The Ultimate Training
When the group finally arrived at the island's shore, Zack was not surprised to find the pokemon in hiding.
"Don't worry, this boy's okay! He's Ash's son, and I know you all remember him!" Zack announced.
Soon after Zack's message, pokemon slowly crawled out of hiding. They were amazed to find Anthony could understand them, and after realizing his familiar smell, they trusted him. Lugia emerged from the water.
"It's nice to finally meet his son." Lugia said.
Anthony was amazed to see another Lugia. Lugia explained his connection to Ash, and Anthony enjoyed hearing more about his father. After that, all of the pokemon jumped on Zack, happy to see him again.
"Listen, I have a favor to ask all of you." Zack stated.
All of the pokemon gathered around, and Zack whispered something to them. Anthony looked on curiously. The pokemon all agreed and ran over to Anthony. The grabbed his clothes and pulled him, with others pushing him along.
"What's going on?" Anthony questioned. "Say hello to your new training partners. I'll see you in a few days." Zack smiled.
Zack laughed as the pokemon dragged him away. Zack spent some more time reminiscing with Lugia about the past. Zack spent some time enjoying himself and visitined some of his old friends on the island. Zack wasn't worried at all for Anthony, because he knew the pokemon would all take good care of him. Meanwhile, Anthony ended up having to rest many times, as well as his pokemon, from the intense training the pokemon gave him. Lugia watched Anthony progress in his training.
"Trust me, these guys are nothing compared to the allies your father has." Lugia assured.
Hearing this fired Anthony up. He worked hard to get his pokemon stronger. After a few days passed, Zack headed out to meet with the pokemon. He wasn't surprised to find Anthony unconscious when he arrived.
"Thanks everyone, I'm sure you did a great job!" Zack thanked the pokemon.
The pokemon were happy to help, and Anthony's Pikachu approached Zack. Zack's Pikachu translated tthe message saying that he got a lot stronger. Zack smiled and took Anthony back to his place on the island.
To be continued...
Next time: With little time left, Anthony sets out for the Pokemon League.
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Post by Mstrgmr on Apr 30, 2006 6:49:29 GMT -5
Awesome!
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Post by HoennMaster on Apr 30, 2006 10:15:17 GMT -5
Good Chapters, and now you have your new longest Fan-Fic, Pokemon wise
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Post by X626 on May 7, 2006 12:02:03 GMT -5
Just for the heck of it, I thought that I would share some of my rejected ideas for the Cyber Pokemon in this fic.
-I originally planned to make Cyber Mew have sort of been created from Ash. When he went to stop Giovanni, he accidetly got in the way of a process in the making, making Cyber Mew contain part of his DNA. That would technically make Cyber Mew, Ash, and Anthony somewhat related. I also planned on giving him a name...Ashura. I rejected this idea after coming up with my Origin of Ash story.
-There were originally planned to be a few more encounters between the characters and them. I rejected the idea because it strayed too far from the main story.
-I originally had planned a scene with Misty, and with Cyber Mew turning into Ash to try and capture her to get to Ash. However, Misty gets warned by Ash ahead of time and she actually manages to stop Cyber Mew. Cyber Mew still gets away. In the end, this idea was rejected because I just didn't feel like using it.
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Post by PokéMaster on May 7, 2006 12:04:42 GMT -5
Interesting...
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Post by Mstrgmr on May 7, 2006 15:50:09 GMT -5
I like the Misty idea
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Post by HoennMaster on May 7, 2006 19:17:48 GMT -5
Interesting indeed
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Post by X626 on May 8, 2006 0:26:32 GMT -5
I liked the Misty part too, but I just didn't really have a good place in the story to put it into. Maybe once I'm done I'll go back and post what the chapters would have been.
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Post by HoennMaster on May 8, 2006 20:07:00 GMT -5
a.k.a. Pokemon Legends: The Lost Chapters?
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