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Post by PokéMaster on Aug 15, 2005 16:56:01 GMT -5
Thank you!
Upcoming Chapters
12. Ash and May! First Date!! 13. Sabrina! The Psychic Gym Leader! 14. Ghost Pokémon Attack!! 15. Marsh Badges! Back to Vermilion! 16. Raichu and the Power of Thunder Love! 17. Rival Battle! Love Vs. Brendan!
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Post by PokéMaster on Aug 16, 2005 10:34:38 GMT -5
Chapter 12
Ash and May! First Date!!
Recap: Ash and Pikachu left Pallet Town to start their Pokémon journey. In Viridian City, they met May who quickly became Ash's friend and journeyed with them to Saffron City. In Saffron, they went to the department store and Ash bought May a diamond necklace to show his feelings for her. She loved it and is still kissing him.
Ash and May kissed and kissed until they could kiss no more. "Ash, you are the best boyfriend ever!" May said to him. "May, we better get some sleep, it's really late," said Ash looking at the clock. 10:30. "Whoa! It's later than I thought," May said also looking at the clock. "We better get some sleep. I'll be right back." While May was in the bathroom changing, Ash got into bed. She came back two minutes later and climbed in bed next to Ash and snuggled up. "I love you, Ash." "I love you too, May." And they fell asleep together. Next morning, May woke up before Ash and went to get dressed. When she came back into the room, Ash was up and ready to go. Halfway to the Gym, Ash voiced something that he'd been sitting on since the previous day. "May, would you like to go on a date?" "Um...." she replied. "Sure. Where d'you want to go?" "I was looking through the guidebook last night and I thought we could go to the best restaurant in town: The Krabby Shack." "Sounds good. What do they serve there?" "I think they serve anything you want," said Ash. So the happy couple headed over to the Krabby Shack. "This place looks nice," said Ash upon entering. "Yeah, it does," agreed May. "Table for two?" asked a waiter. "Yeah," said Ash. "Romantic or no?" "Yeah," said May. "Smoking or non?" "Non," said Ash. "Follow me." They followed him around many tables and found themselves in a small room with only a single-sided booth. "Here you are," said the waiter, placing their menus down on the table, "I'll be back in about 5 minutes to take your order." And he left. Ash and May sat down and looked at their menus. "I think I'm going to have a cheeseburger," said May. "Me too," replied Ash. The waiter returned 5 minutes later and took their order. "This is a nice restaurant," said Ash. "Yeah," said May edging closer to Ash and placing her arm around him. The waiter returned with their food 15 minutes later and found Ash and May snogging. "I'll just leave your food here, shall I?" he asked putting it down and leaving. Ash and May broke apart and ate their food. That night, at the Pokémon Center, Nurse Joy told them that the only available room had only one bed. "We don't care," May said cheerfully. Nurse Joy showed them to the room and left. "Be right back," said May. Ash sat down on the bed and waited. May came back two minutes later and Ash got into bed. May layed down and Ash placed his arm around her. "Good night, May. I love you," said Ash. May put her head on Ash's shoulders, said, "Good night, Ash. I love you too," and fell asleep.
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Post by HoennMaster on Aug 16, 2005 13:26:49 GMT -5
Cute! Finally some Pokemon Romance!
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Post by PokéMaster on Aug 16, 2005 16:27:02 GMT -5
Chapter 13
Sabrina! The Psychic Gym Leader!
Recap: Ash and Pikachu left Pallet Town on their Pokémon journey. In Viridian City, they met another trainer, May who has journeyed with them to Saffron City and who has become Ash's girlfriend.
Ash woke up the next morning first and saw that May was still sleeping in his arm. Unable to move, Ash just lay there until May woke up and went to get dressed. When May re-entered the room, Ash asked her, "Ready to go get another badge today, May?" "Yup," she replied promptly. They set out from the Center two minutes later and headed down the crowded street. "Where's the Gym?" May asked after about half an hour of searching town. "I don't know," said Ash truthfully. They sat down on a bench and while Ash looked through the guidebook for a map of Saffron, May put her head down on Ash's shoulder and watched. Finally, Ash found a map and it said that the Gym was two blocks away. They walked the distance and entered the Gym. The Gym was full of maze-like corridors. They might as well have been searching for a needle in a haystack because they couldn't find anybody there. "Hello?" "Is anyone there?" "Anybody?" After two hours of searching, both Ash and May were tired and decided to leave when they found a person standing alone. "Hello?" May asked, walking into the room. Hello, the person said telepathically. I am Sabrina, the Gym Leader of Saffron City. I command Psychic Type Pokémon. The only type effective on them is Ghost but there aren't any ghost Pokémon around here. Do you still want to battle? "Of course!" shouted Ash, throwing a PokéBall. "Clefairy!" "Mudkip! Go!" Kadabra! Use Psychic! A PokéBall lifted itself from Sabrina's belt and a Kadabra appeared. "Kadabra!" Both Clefairy and Mudkip were thrown across the room where they slammed into the wall and fell to the ground, unconscious. I win! said Sabrina. Now I get to play with you! And with that, she turned them into dolls.
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Post by Mstrgmr on Aug 16, 2005 16:31:09 GMT -5
I edited one of your posts to fix some spelling errors. Your story is great!
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Post by AshTiedUpFan on Aug 16, 2005 16:39:40 GMT -5
[glow=red,2,300]Very nice! I love this fanfic! Keep it up! And please read mine, tell me what you think about it and if you see any errors, please help correct them for me[/glow]
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Post by Lit'l-Yellow-Fellow on Aug 16, 2005 20:43:10 GMT -5
These are good, read mine!
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Post by PokéMaster on Aug 17, 2005 8:48:06 GMT -5
Chapter 14
Ghost Pokémon Attack!!
Recap: Ash and Pikachu left Pallet Town to start their Pokémon journey. In Viridian City, they met May, who joined them and quickly became Ash's girlfriend. She traveled with them to Saffron City where Sabrina, the Gym Leader has turned them into dolls to play with.
Ash and May had to endure three long days of being played with and being tortured by Sabrina. It was not fun being a doll. They got thrown around, squashed by large objects and poked with voodoo needles. Finally, on the fourth day, some hope came for them. It was Brendan. He told Sabrina that he wanted to battle but did not want a badge. He wanted Ash and May to be turned back to human and for them to receive badges. Sabrina agreed and the battle began. Ash and May had been propped up facing the battlefield so they could see everything. "Go, Haunter!" Brendan shouted, throwing a PokéBall. A large purple ghost emerged from it. Go, Kadabra! Sabrina shouted telepathically. "Haunter! Use your Hype Dream Combo!" "Haunter! Haunter!" Haunter emitted a strange sound and Kadabra fell asleep. Then, Haunter began to suck on the air really hard. Kadabra seemed to be taking a lot of damage. Recover! But, Kadabra could not recover. "Dream Eater!" Haunter sucked on the air again. Kadabra took more damage and woke up. It tried to stand but couldn't and fell back over to the floor. "Kadabra is unable to battle! Haunter is the winner! Brendan's prize: Ash and May turned human and given badges!" shouted the judge raising the green flag that signaled the challenger had won. Before Ash and May were turned human, Brendan left. Ash and May were turned back and they both received Marsh Badges. Take them before I change my mind, said Sabrina. I will transport you out of the Gym. Everything around Ash and May faded and they found themselves outside the Gym again. "Let's get back to the Pokémon Center to sleep and then we can head back to Vermilion City," said Ash. "Good plan," replied May. 5 minutes later, Ash and May were climbing into bed. May fell asleep in Ash's arm right away but Ash lay awake for a while thinking about the Vermilion Gym Leader, Lt. Surge and wondering whether he would be able to beat him when they arrived.
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Post by AshTiedUpFan on Aug 17, 2005 9:19:59 GMT -5
[glow=red,2,300]Great chapter! I loved it! Keep it up![/glow]
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Post by PokéMaster on Aug 17, 2005 10:27:32 GMT -5
Chapter 15
Marsh Badges! Back to Vermilion!
Recap: Ash and Pikachu left Pallet Town to start their Pokémon journey. In Viridian City, they met May who joined them and quickly became Ash's girlfriend. Ash and May traveled to Saffron City where they were turned into dolls but saved by Brendan who forced Sabrina to turn them back.
Ash finally got to sleep around 11:00 and May was the first one up the next morning. She woke up around 6:30 and waited for the alarm to ring at 7:00 to get up. She got up at 7:00 and went to the bathroom to change into her clothes. When she came back, Ash was awake. "Good, you're up. Let's go," said Ash jumping out of bed. He was already fully clothed. "Wow, you're really eager to get to the next Gym aren't you?" May asked. "Yep!" Five minutes later, they were on the road again. "Ash! May!" Ash and may started and turned around to see Brock, the Gym Leader of Pewter City running towards them. "I got tired of running the Gym so I thought I'd take you up on your offer to come with you, Ash." "Ash, did you ask him if he wanted to come with?" May asked, surprised. "Yeah. I did. I doubled back to the Gym after you fell asleep," Ash replied. "Do either of you want to have a practice battle?" Brock asked them. "I do! I do!" May said quickly. "Okay! Stand over there and call out your Pokémon!" May walked a little ways away, turned around and faced Brock and shouted, "Go, Mudkip!" Mudkip emerged from its PokéBall looking ready and energized. "Zubat! Go!" Brock shouted, throwing a PokéBall. A small bat materialized. "Mudkip! Use Water Gun!" "Zubat! Dodge and use Supersonic!" Zubat dodged and Mudkip was hit by a strong Supersonic attack. Mudkip became confused and tried to hit itself. "Mudkip!" "Mud-Mud-Mud-Mudkip!" Mudkip shouted and then, all of a sudden, Mudkip started to glow. The glowing Mudkip started changing its form. Its arms became longer and it stood up on two feet. When it stopped glowing, Mudkip was gone. In its place was a Marshtomp. "May! Your Mudkip evolved!" Ash said in awe. "Cool! What attacks can it use, Ash?" May asked him. Ash pulled out his PokéDex and looked up Marshtomp. "Marshtomp's attacks are: Mud Shot, Muddy Water, Earthquake and Hydro Pump," Ash read aloud from the PokéDex. "You better not use Mud Shot or Earthquake because Zubat's a Flying Pokémon and it won't affect it. "Right! Marshtomp! Use Hydro Pump!" May shouted. A huge stream of water emerged from Marshtomp's mouth and hit Zubat head-on. Zubat fell to the ground unconscious. "Good job, May!" Brock said as he recalled Zubat. "Thanks, Ash. It was really all thanks to you that I won." May said, turning to Ash. "No, it wasn't," Ash replied. "Yes, it was. You looked Marshtomp up in your PokéDex and told me not to use Earthquake or Mud Shot. Thank you." And she kissed him again. Brock stood there, completely nonplussed at the fact that May and Ash were dating now. When they finally broke apart, Brock asked them, "So, you guys are dating now?" "Yeah," said Ash, blushing again. "We went on a date to the Krabby Shack in Saffron." "Where are you guys headed?" Brock asked. "Vermilion City," May told him. "We were already there but we saw Brendan's Dugtrio get defeated by Lt. Surge's Raichu so we thought we better get another badge before battling him," she continued. "May, do you want to team up on Lt. Surge in a tag battle?" Ash asked suddenly. "That's a good idea. With your Pikachu and my Marshtomp, we could win easily," said May. "We're here," she added seeing the town right in front of them. "Let's get our Pokémon to the Center and we can battle tomorrow." They walked to the Pokémon Center and checked in, asking for only two beds. "Ok," said Nurse Joy. "Follow me." They followed and entered their room. It was already 9:15 so they got into bed(May snuggling up to Ash) and fell asleep.
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