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Post by Mstrgmr on Apr 15, 2006 14:53:21 GMT -5
This is a new fan fic I have been thinking about writing, I might or might not, but I decided to post my idea, it would be about Ash, May, Brock, and Max, I have a few ideas for chapter names, and here they are, Pokmaster could probably figure out how I got this idea
1. Enter the Temple
2. The First Rooms
3. Temple Guard!
4. Split Up
5. Twin Temple Guard Battle
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Post by Mstrgmr on Apr 15, 2006 14:58:02 GMT -5
Here are the basics, Ash, May, Brock, and Max enter a mysterious house to get out of a very bad thunderstorm. While inside, they get knocked out, and when they wake up, they are outside of a mysterious temple, and a they here a voice, telling them they have to make it through the temple, get a jewel at the back of the temple, and bring it outside, or they will be trapped forever. There are many different rooms inside, ad in each, you have to do something to get the next door to open. What do you guys think? Does this sound good?
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Post by PokéMaster on Apr 15, 2006 15:34:55 GMT -5
Sounds like "Legends of the Hidden Temple" and that's a great show!
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Post by Mstrgmr on Apr 15, 2006 16:16:43 GMT -5
That's exactly what it's like! The rooms wouldn't be like they are in the show though, some might be, but others will involve different Pokemon
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Post by Mstrgmr on Apr 15, 2006 19:31:52 GMT -5
Chapter 1
Temple of Doom
We join Ash and friends today as they are on their way to next adventure, but a huge thunderstorm stopped that.
"We've got to find cover!" said Ash.
"I think I saw a house a little ways back." said Max.
"Let's see if we can find it!" said May. They went looking, and found a mansion. Brock knocked on the door.
"Hello, is anyone home?" No answer. "Hello?" Still no answer.
"I think we should go in, I'm sure the owner of this mansion would understand." They entered, and the house was eerily quiet, and there was sign that anyone had lived there in a long time.
"This place is creepy." said May.
"It may be, but it's better than being out in that thunderstorm." said Max. As he was saying that, a strange gas filled the room. Everyone was knocked out, and when they awoke, they were in front of a strange looking temple.
"Hello, and welcome to The Temple Doom!" bellowed a strange voice that seemed to be coming from every direction.
"What are you talking about?" yelled Ash.
"This place is an ancient Mayan sanctuary, still being protected today, and I need you to retrieve a jewel from inside, and bring it outside of The Temple for me."
"Why should we do that?" asked May. "We could just leave!" She walked a few steps, and ran into an invisible wall.
"Sorry, but unless you have the jewel, you can't leave, and if you don't get it by nightfall, you'll be trapped inside forever!"
"Why did you bring us here?" asked Brock.
"For my own enjoyment, along with some other reasons."
"You're sick and twisted!" said Max.
"Yes, I know, but I am going to give to some help, if you are caught by a Temple Guard, they will battle you. Normally, if you lost, you would be taken away and locked up, only to be freed if someone gets the jewel outside of The Temple, but I am giving each of you a Pendent of Life, whih if you give it to a Temple Guard after you lost, he will let you go. Also, I have the ability to bring any Pokémon you have or have had here to help you, so go ahead and choose right now!"
"I choose my Charizard, Pikachu, Sceptile, Swellow, Squirtle, and Glalie!"
"I choose my Forretress, Ludicolo, Onix, Crobat, Geodude, and Vulpix!"
"I choose my Combusken, Bulbasaur, Skitty, Eevee, Squirtle, and Munchlax!"
"Good choices, here you go." All of those Pokémon's PokéBalls appeared in front of them. "Now about the rooms, in all of them, you will have to do something to get the next door to open. Some may be simple, and others may be hard. Each room has multiple ways to go, so choose wisely. Now you better hurry, time's running out." He disappeared, but then returned. "One other thing if you don't have Pokémon, you can't enter The Temple." Max fell down a trap door. "The only way to get him back is to retrieve the jewel. Good-bye for now!" He disappeared.
"I guess we better get going." said Ash. They entered The Temple, not sure if they'll ever return.
TO BE CONTINUED....
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Post by HoennMaster on Apr 15, 2006 21:35:14 GMT -5
A) Thank you for having Glalie!
B) Thank God for no Max! (at least for now!)
Good start!
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Post by PokéMaster on Apr 15, 2006 21:38:08 GMT -5
Awesome chapter!
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Post by Mstrgmr on Apr 16, 2006 5:56:19 GMT -5
A) Thank you for having Glalie! B) Thank God for no Max! (at least for now!) Good start! Thanks, and Max will barely be in this, except at the end, and I figured you guys would like to see Glalie in this |
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Post by HoennMaster on Apr 16, 2006 13:00:49 GMT -5
I'm very glad!
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Post by Mstrgmr on Apr 16, 2006 16:03:31 GMT -5
Chapter 2
The First Rooms
We join our heroes as Ash, May and Brock have just started their journey through The Temple of Doom. Max was taken because he didn't have any Pokémon, and after going up some stairs, our heroes found two different directions they could go. One led into a cave, with a sign saying The Ledges, and the other led into room with a sign saying The Crypt.
"I say we go into The Ledges, The Crypt looks scary!" said May.
"Ok." said Ash and Brock. They started crawling through The Ledges, and found some doors, but couldn't figure out how to open them.
"I wonder how we can get these to open." said Brock.
"I think I know, I think there's a button at the top of this cave, maybe we should press it!" Ash climbed up to the button, and pressed it, causing a door to open above them. "It looks like we have to go into The Crypt." Everyone climbed up into The Crypt and tried to figure out what to do, but they couldn't figure it out. All that was in the room was three skeletons, all holding books, and one door that didn't lead to the exit.
"There are no buttons in here, I wonder what we do." said May, while Brock was examining one of the skeletons.
"I think I know, on this skeleton's book, it says pull here, so maybe I should pull it." He did, but nothing happened.
"Maybe we need to pull all of the books!" Ash pulled one while May pulled the other, causing the door to open. "Alright! Let's go!" They went through the door which led them down a small staircase and to a bridge with a door on the other side, but no button.
"I guess we'll have to do something special to open this door too." said Brock.
"Maybe that rope has something to do with!" May pointed at a rope hanging from the ceiling. "Bulbasaur I choose you! Use yur Vine Whip to pull that rope!" When Bulbasaur pulled the rope, the door opened. "Good job Bulbasaur, return!" They went through the door and up a staircase to a room with three pots, labeled The King's Storeroom, but before they could do anything, a strange man dressed in ancient clothing came out from a secret door.
"Hahahaha! You have entered my room, and now we must battle!" said the man.
"Are you a Temple Guard?" asked Brock.
"Yes I am, now who will battle me?"
"I will!" said Ash.
"Fine, it will be a 2 on 2 double battle!" He pressed a button on the wall, causing them to teleport outside of The Temple to have more room. "Go Tropius and Sandslash!"
"Go Glalie and Pikachu!"
TO BE CONTINUED....
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