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Post by AshTiedUpFan on Aug 17, 2005 11:08:40 GMT -5
Chapter 8, Pewter Cym Battle!
Ash, Misty and I arrived at the Pewter City Gym. Ash and I got our pokeballs out and our Poliwag came out. "Well, here we go, Ash." I said to Ash. Ash nodded. We all went into the gym. "Hello?" Ash said. We saw a boy come out of the shadows. "Hi. My name is Brock. Are you two here for a battle?" Brock asked I nodded "Yep! Me and Ash." Brock nodded "OK, we'll battle right here. You two against me. One pokemon each, no time limit." Brock explained the rules. "I choose you, Onix! Brock said as he called out his Onix. "OK, I chose you Poliwag!" Ash said as his Poliwag got in front. Same with mine. "Onix, use your Rock Throw attack!" Brock said. "Dodge and use Water Gun!" Ash and I said Our Poliwag brothers dodged Onix's attack and fired Water Guns at Onix, dealing great damage to it! Soon, Onix fell to the ground! "Onix in unable to battle! The winners are Ash and Josh!" The judge said. Brock returned his Onix then walked over to me and Ash and Misty. "Well done you two! You really did earn these badges." Brock said as he gave me and Ash our badges. We thanked Brock then Ash, Misty and I along with our pokemon, went to heal our pokemon.
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Post by Mstrgmr on Aug 19, 2005 17:25:22 GMT -5
Fixed errors for you.
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Post by MountainDewDawg on Aug 22, 2005 13:58:48 GMT -5
[glow=black,2,300]I like it[/glow]
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Post by Mstrgmr on Aug 22, 2005 16:23:50 GMT -5
Yeah this is Josh's FanFic
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X626
Volcano Badge 
An Experiment Gone Wrong
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Post by X626 on Aug 22, 2005 16:47:19 GMT -5
Yeah, I accidently put it in the wrong place somehow. Stupid computer! >_>
Just forget I posted that. Anyways, good fan fic, keep it up!
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Post by AshTiedUpFan on Aug 28, 2005 12:40:50 GMT -5
Chapter 9, May! A New Friend! On The Way To The Next Gym!
Ash, Misty and I had left Pewter City after Ash and I had won our Boulder Badges. Ash was very happy about it. I was too, but my heart was still broken after Jen had betrayed me. Misty must have seen this. "Josh? What's wrong?" Ash turned to look at me. "Yeah. What's wrong, Josh? Aren't you happy that we won our first badges?" Ash asked me. I nodded my head. "Yeah, I am happy about that Ash. But, I'm not happy that Jen betrayed me." I said, with my voice shaking. i just had to have some time to myself. Ash and Misty saw me go for a walk with Jolteon. "Poor Josh. Jen musy have been very close to him." Misty said. Ash nodded and told Msty when Jen said when we first met her on our journey. I was walking a little then I sat down. "Why Jolteon? Why did Jen betray me? I loved her!" I said as I cried into my hands. I was happy that Ash and I got our badges, but I was heartbroken. Just then, a girl came over to me. A girl with brown hair, She looked concerned for me. "Hi. Are you ok?" She asked me as she sat down next to me. I shrugged as I told her about my problems. "I'm sorry to hear that." I looked at her. "I'm sorry, but who are you?" I asked the girl. The girl said, "Oh! I forgot to introduce myself. My name is May." May said as she smiled. I started to smile as well. "I'm Josh Ketchum. Ash Ketchum's brother." I said to May. We ;ppled into each other's eyes for a while. "Do you mind if I travled with you Josh?" May asked me. I smiled even more. "I don't mind, May. What pokemon do you have?" I asked May and she threw a pokeball reaving a Torchic. May and i got up, Jolteon then got on my right shoulder. May and I went back to Ash and Misty. I introduced everyone. Ash and Misty said it was fine. Som Ash, Misty, May and I continued to the next gym
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Post by Mstrgmr on Aug 28, 2005 13:37:48 GMT -5
Fixed errors again, just to let you know this is how you spell Torchic
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Nonameletdown
Zephyr Badge 
Maga
We Are One Tonight... and We're Singing it Out
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Post by Nonameletdown on Aug 29, 2005 17:31:26 GMT -5
This is a good fanfic... got good potential
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Post by Mstrgmr on Aug 29, 2005 17:32:12 GMT -5
Yes it does
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Post by AshTiedUpFan on Sept 7, 2005 20:43:00 GMT -5
Chapter 10, The Return Of Jeremy!
Ash, Misty, May and I were walking to Cerulean City. May turned to me. "Josh, are you ok? You havn't said anything in a while." May said to me, very concerned. Ash and Misty turned to look at me as well. "I'm ok." I said to Ash, Misty and May. I realy was doing fine, Just as we sat down, I saw someone run up to us. Ash, Misty and I realized who it was. "Jeremy?!" I asked in shock Jeremy nodded "Yep, it's me, Josh. I heard you guys were on route to Cerulean City. I was hoping to catch up with you." Jeremy said. He then saw May. "Who are you?" Jeremy asked May. "I'm May. Nice to meet you Jeremy." May said as she shook Jeremy's hand. "Do you guys mind if I come along?" Jeremy asked. "No problem." Ash said to Jeremy. Hours later, we all continued on our way to Cerulean City
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