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Post by AshTiedUpFan on Aug 11, 2005 17:26:27 GMT -5
Hi! Here is chapter 1 of my fanfic!
The Adventures of Ash and Joshua Ketchum! Chapter 1, The Journey Starts!
One day in Pallet Town, Ash had been getting ready for his pokemon journey with his brother, me, Joshua. I had just gotten up from sleeping from the previous night. Ash and I had gotten dressed. We had to rush, because we had overslept. So, we dashed out of our house and made it over to Professor Oak's lab. Ash knocked on the door. Professor Oak opened the door. "Sorry we're late, professr." Ash said. I nodded "Yeah. I guess we just lost track of time." I said. Professor Oak replied. "I understand. But, all but two pokemon had been taken." He pointed to two pokeballs on the table in back of him. Ash said, "We'll take them professor." "Okay, but be warned." Professor Oak said as he gave us the two pokeballs. Ash opened his and out came a Pikachu. I opened mine and out came a Jolteon. They shocked me and Ash. We recovered and Professor Oak gave us each 5 pokeballs and two pokedexes. Thenm, Ash and I left to say goodbye to our mom. Then, we started our pokemon journey. With Pikachu and Jolteon out of thier pokeballs. After a run in with a flock of Spearow, Pikachu and Jolteon gained our trust and we cwent to look for a Pokemon Center.
Sorry for the lack of action. That'll start next chapter
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Post by AshTiedUpFan on Aug 12, 2005 6:22:20 GMT -5
Chapter 2, Viridian City Pokemon Center!
Ash and I had made it to the next town, Viridian City. We got just right next to the Pokemon Center when Ash looked at me, very concerned. "Are you ok Josh? You look a little pale." Ash said. "I'm fine Ash. Just a little tired. That's all." I told Ash. Ash was holding Pikachu in his arms and I was holding Jolteon in my arms. We walked into the Pokemon Center and walked up to Nurse Joy. "Nurse Joy, could you please help our Pikachu and Jolteon?" Ash asked Nurse Joy as Ash and I handed her our pokemon. "Sure. This'll take a little while." Nurse Joy said. Ash and I looked at each other. "Ash, I'm sure Pikachu and Jolteon will be just fine." I told Ash. Ash nodded. Ash went to call our mom and I went to get ourselves something to eat. I returned after Ash was done on the phone. Thirty minutes later and Nurse Joy came out with Pikachu and Jolteon. She came over to me and Ash. "Your Pikachu and Jolteon will be just fine." Nurse Joy told me and Ash. Both Pikachu and Jolteon jumped onto mine and Ash's shoulders. Then, we left to continue our pokemon journey
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Post by AshTiedUpFan on Aug 12, 2005 16:37:12 GMT -5
Chapter 3. A Blast From Josh's Past!
Ash and I were walking along Route 2, which led to Viridian Forrest. I has been thinking hard and long about something. "Josh, what's wrong?" Ash asked me. I replied. "Nothing Ash. It's just that Pewter City's gym leader's pokemon are rock and ground types. Electrike pokemon wouldn't do much damage against rock and ground types. We would need a water pokemon. One for each of us." Ash nodded. "You're right Josh. Let's hope we run into some water pokemon soon." Just then, I heard someone call "Josh!" "Was that you who called my name, Ash?" i asked Ash. Ash shook his head. Then, Ash and I turned around to see a girl, about my age running towards us. I realized who it was right away. "Jen!?" I asked shocked. Jen stopped when she got to me and Ash. Jen said that she lived in Pallet Town, right next to us. Ashand I invited Jen to travle with us. Jen happily accepted and gave me a hug! After she let go, Ash, Jen and I continued walking to Pewter City
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Post by AshTiedUpFan on Aug 15, 2005 16:42:22 GMT -5
Chapter 4, Continueing To Pewter City! Misty, the new friend!
Ash, Jen and I were continueing walk to Pewter City. Jen was telling me and Ash what happened to her after I last saw her. Ash knew there was something between me and Jen. Ash knew we were meant for each other. Just then, we saw two Poliwag! "Ash, this will help us out!" I told Ash. Pikachu and Jolteon jumped from our shoulders and got into attack mode. "Pikachu, use ThunderBolt on Poliwag!" Ash told Pikachu. "Jolteon, use ThunderShock on the second Poliwag!" i told Jolteon. Pikachu and Jolteon both hit the two Poliwag, making them very weak. Ash and I threw our Pokeballs at the weakened Poliwags. After 10 seconds, the pokeballs stopped wiggleing. Adh and I were happy of our pokemon capture! We got our pokeballs and called out our new Poliwags. Jen, Ash and I continued walking with our pokemon along with us. Soon, we came accross a girl, about Ash's age, with orange hair. "Hi! My name is Misty." The girl said to me, Ash and Jen. We in trun introduced ourselves and Misty decided to come along with us. Now, all four of us, continued to Pewter City
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Post by AshTiedUpFan on Aug 16, 2005 16:33:19 GMT -5
Chapter 5, Jen's Betrayal! Josh's Heartache!
Ash, Misty, Jen and I were still on our way to Pewter City. Night soon fell. Ash, Misty and I had set up camp. Jen had suddenly disapeared. "I wonder where Jen went." I said sounding worried and sad. "Jen might just need some time alone." Ash said. Misty wasn't sure however. I chose to go for a little walk with Jolteon. "I hope Josh is ok, Misty" Ash said to Misty after I was gone. "So do I Ash." Misty said to Ash. Misty put her hand on Ash's left shoulder. Suddenly they heard my voice! Ash, Misty and Pikachu all ran to me. They stopped when they found me. I was on the ground, crying my heart out to Jen, who was in a Team, Rocket uniform! "Jen?! What's going on?" Ash asked shocked. "Jen is with Team Rocket, Ash" I said to Ash. We all looked at Jen not wanting to believe this. "Shame you won't join Team Rocket, Josh! You would spen more time with me!" With that, Jen left. My heart was broken in half. Jen betrayed me!
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Post by PokéMaster on Aug 16, 2005 16:35:47 GMT -5
I modifyed the title of your post so that everything was spelled right.
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Post by PokéMaster on Aug 16, 2005 16:42:21 GMT -5
[glow=red,2,300]Your fanfic is great. I will continue to fix spelling errors and mstrgmr14 will too as he's now a moderator here on the fanfic boards.[/glow]
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Post by AshTiedUpFan on Aug 16, 2005 19:00:24 GMT -5
[glow=red,2,300]Thanks![/glow]
Chapter 6, Feeling Terrible
Ash, Misty, Pikachu, Jolteon and I finally made it to Pewter City! We instally went to the Pokemon Center. Nurse Joy took mine, and Ash's pokemon to get healed. Misty and Ash then turned to me. "Are you feeling ok, Josh?" Misty asked me, concerned. "Not really. I thought I could trust Jen. But after what happened yesterday, I think I'll never find someone to love me again." I said very sadly. I chose to go to take a nap. "Poor Josh. I wish there was something we could do Misty." Ash said. Misty nodded. "I know what you mean, Ash. Josh must be losing his trust for people now. We have to do something." Misty and Ash talked for a while. After Nurse Joy brought our pokemon back, she realized I wasn't there. "Josh is feeling really down Nurse Joy." Misty said as she and Ash told Nurse Joy what happened. Later, Ash and Misty found me, sound asleep on a bed in a room. Jolteon ran over to me and curled up next to me. Misty had just gotten an idea! She had a piece of paper with some friends of mine on it. "This'll cheer Josh up." Misty said and she and Ash left to put thier plan into action
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Post by Mstrgmr on Aug 17, 2005 6:50:18 GMT -5
Fixed errors for you.
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Post by AshTiedUpFan on Aug 17, 2005 9:30:28 GMT -5
Chapter 7, Surprise! Josh's Feeling Better!
Ash and Misty had called some of my friends and someone else. Hours passed and then the people had arrived! "Where's Josh?" Asked a boy. "He's sleeping right now." Ash said then he and Misty told them what happened. Everyone was shocked! The boy chose to introduce himself. "My name is Jeremy. I was Josh's other brother. I left on my own pokemon journey after you were born Ash. These are Chris, and Tom. Old friends of Josh." Jeremy said as he introduced the other tow boys. 40 minutes later, I finally woke up. Jolteon and I went out of the room and saw Ash and Misty. They told me they called some friends of mine as well as my other brother, Jeremy. After Jeremy, Chris and Tom left, I felt much better. "Thanks Ash, Misty!" They said, "No problem Josh." Then we left to go to the Pewter City Gym
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