Lit'l-Yellow-Fellow
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Post by Lit'l-Yellow-Fellow on Feb 22, 2006 7:32:27 GMT -5
OK.
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Post by Lit'l-Yellow-Fellow on Mar 20, 2006 21:59:40 GMT -5
Is this story on hiatus?
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Post by PokéMaster on Mar 20, 2006 22:28:25 GMT -5
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Post by HoennMaster on Mar 20, 2006 23:08:51 GMT -5
As Jynx Hitmonlee's Rolling Kick, Hitmonchan's Fire Punch struck Jynx and it crumpled over in pain.
doesn't make sense, and this is going to get very interesting again.
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Post by PokéMaster on Mar 21, 2006 8:50:49 GMT -5
I fixed the sentence. It should've been:
As Jynx dodged Hitmonlee's Rolling Kick, Hitmonchan's Fire Punch struck Jynx and it crumpled over in pain.
And this will get interesting again.
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Post by PokéMaster on Mar 21, 2006 9:10:22 GMT -5
Chapter 103
Getting to Jasmine! Drake Takes On the Guards!!
Previously: Gary and Chuck continued to battle. And while they battled, Jasmine watched the scene from the Lighthouse. Clair confronted Drake and told him that he needed to stop Jasmine...
"Salamence! Let's Fly!" cried Drake as he took off from the Dragon's Den entrance in Blackthorn City. From Blackthorn he flew straight to Olivine and when he got there, he found the storm clouds from Cianwood had reached the small port city. He returned Salamence to its Pokéball. Striding quickly to the Lighthouse, Drake wrenched open the door and found himself facing a guard. "Your name?" asked the guard. "You don't know? I am Drake, the Dragon Master!" said Drake. "I am here to see Jasmine, and nothing will stop me!" "Would you like to bet on that?" asked the guard, pulling out a Pokéball. "Girafarig! I choose you!" "Shelgon! Use Dragon Claw!" cried Drake. Girafarig fainted and Drake pressed onward. Along the course of the way, seven more guards faced Drake, using Pupitar, Shuckle, Crobat, Tauros, Farfetch'd, and Nidoqueen, but Drake knocked them all out with his Shelgon. He finally reached the top of the Lighthouse but found the door locked. "Salamence! Dragon Claw!" Salamence busted the door open. "Jasmine!" cried Drake, walking into the room. "This has got to stop!" "No," said Jasmine in a robot like voice. Her eyes glazed over. "I only obey my master. And his instructions are to kill anyone who dare approaches me. Steelix. Use Iron Tail." "Salamence! Block that attack and use Dragon Claw!" Salamence roared and smashed into Steelix. Steelix stumbled but regained its footing and then prepared for Hyper Beam. "Salamence! Block that attack with Heat Wave!" called Drake. The two attacks collided in midair and created an explosion that destroyed the whole Lighthouse, with Drake and Jasmine still inside...
From Cianwood, Chuck looked out over the sea and saw that Jasmine had failed. "No!" he cried. Returning all of his Pokémon, he left Cianwood atop a wild Tentacruel. Ash walked over to Gary, who was near death, and told him that it would all be over soon. Sakura told Espeon to restore Gary's health and a brilliant white light filled Gary. Once he had recovered, he told Ash, May and Sakura that it all started when Chuck confronted him near Mt. Mortar after Ash and May had left...
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Post by HoennMaster on Mar 25, 2006 1:09:33 GMT -5
that was really good!
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Post by Mstrgmr on Mar 25, 2006 6:27:03 GMT -5
I agree!
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Post by PokéMaster on Mar 27, 2006 17:53:12 GMT -5
Thanks. I'm working on Chapter 104 right now. Here's the title:
Gary's Side of the Story! The Search For Drake Begins!!
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Lit'l-Yellow-Fellow
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Post by Lit'l-Yellow-Fellow on Apr 6, 2006 11:48:40 GMT -5
I must've missed something. Why is Jasmine evil?
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