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Post by Mstrgmr on Mar 27, 2006 7:04:27 GMT -5
It can't, but They aren't called Fan-Fics for a reason, they got to stand out somehow, and for me, it's learning attacks that they can't learn in the games and show. Ok, and nice chapter
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Post by HoennMaster on Mar 27, 2006 14:35:26 GMT -5
Do you guys think I dragged out the Nightrider arc a little too long?
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Post by Mstrgmr on Mar 27, 2006 15:03:10 GMT -5
A little, should've been a chapter or two shorter
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Post by HoennMaster on Apr 14, 2006 23:23:35 GMT -5
Chapter 23 - Sibling Rivalry
It was morning at Pokémon Academy. Jaden said staring at the ocean. Down below he saw Cain and Josh battling. “My brother is so careless” he mumbled. After lunch Jaden came to the Blaziken Red lunchroom. “What do you want?” Josh said. “Let’s battle right now” Jaden snapped back. “Why?” “Because, loser leaves the academy” Jaden laughed. “Fine!” Josh said in an angry voice. He accepted even though he didn’t want to leave. Outside they began the battle. “Go Flygon!” Jaden said. “Come on out Ivysaur!” Josh said. “Flygon use Dragonbreath!” “Ivysaur dodge and use Vine Whip to grab it!” Josh ordered. Ivysaur managed to avoid the attack but before it used Vine Whip Flygon used Steel Wing. Then it grabbed Ivysaur and threw it down to the ground and used Flamethrower. “Ivysaur use Vine Whip again!” “Flygon send it back with Steel Wing!” “Try Razor Leaf” “Used Iron Tail!” Ivysaur was knocked out. Josh returned it and sent out Marshtomp. “Flygon use Flamethrower!” Jaden said. “Marshtomp jump and use Mud Shot!” This time the attacked hit and Marshtomp got an Iron Tail in too. “Flygon use Steel wing!” “Marshtomp use Mud Shot again!” Flygon fell to the ground unable to battle. Jaden returned it an called out Gengar!” “Marshtomp use Water Gun!” Josh commanded. “Gengar jump and use Shadow Ball!” Marshtomp was unable to battle. “No” Josh said falling to the ground. “He lost” Cain said. “We’ll I guess I lost and I’ll be leaving the island like you’ve always wanted” Josh said trying to hide his tear. “No. You don’t have to leave. This battle was just a test, a test for me” Jaden said “Stay, and have fun now, because your going to need it soon” he walked away. After they got back to the dorms Cain started talking to Josh. “What was that about?” “My brother has never thought highly of me. He always sees me as he pathetic weak brother who won’t amount to anything here at Pokémon Academy” Josh said. “But why would he say that you have to leave and then say you could stay if you lost” Cain questioned. “I think he was preparing me, preparing me for the Shadow Riders!” Josh said in a exciting voice. “Maybe” Cain added. “I’m ready for this!” Josh said. “So you’re ready, then you’ll be my victim!” Stacy said laughing as she disappeared from the window where she was spying.
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Post by HoennMaster on Apr 19, 2006 20:58:59 GMT -5
I was inspired for these chapters!
Chapter 24 - Vampire Scheme (1)
The sun was setting on Academy Island. Stacy was sitting in her Swampert Blue room taking a bath in her whirlpool tub. A computer was on the edge of it. The screen started to go a gray and then turn to static, she sulked down into the tub not knowing what was going on. As someone started to form on the screen she quickly turned around scared as can be. “Turn around you idiot it’s me!” someone said. She turned around and saw her master on the screen. “Oh yeah, I knew all along!” she said in a fake laugh. “I’ll cut to the chase. Two of our Shadow Trainers have been beaten. I can’t unlock the Bio Pokémon if I don’t have any army!” “So how does this tie into me?” Stacy questioned. “Easy, I want you to recruit all of the top students at the academy and turn them into Shadow Trainers!” “Sounds easy, I know just who to call” she said laughing. “Then get going!” “Yes, Mysticon!” Stacy said. After turning the computer off she drained the tub, got out and dried off and slipped on her silky robe. “I know just who to call” she said picking up a phone. The next day in class the key holders were talking about how they could stay ahead of the Shadow Trainers. “They’re unpredictable, there might be on the island already!” Alexis said. “What about that new Stacy girl” Zane said, “Remember last time there was a new student it turned out to be a Shadow Trainer” “Then are you pointing to Xander too” Cain asked. “Yeah right” Zane laughed. The bell rang and they all went back to their dorms. That night Stacy came to the roof of the Swampert Blue dorm and looked around. “Where is she!” he said impatiently. “I’m here Stacy” a feminine voice said descending upon the roof. “Finally, now down to business Vampira. I want you to brainwash all of the students in the in this building and make them my slaves!” Stacy laughed. “I don’t do brainwashing, I turn them into Vampires” Vampira said. “Can I at least control them!” Stacy yelled impatiently. “Yes, now I’ll go to work” Vampira replied sinking into the building. “I’ll go down in history!” Stacy laughed. Vampira went threw one hallway turning all of the Swampert’s into Vampires as she went. She finally came to Zane’s room. She flung the door open, which made Zane dart up out of his bed. “Goodnight Honey!” Vampira said as she zapped Zane. The student screamed as they were one by one turned into vampires. Cain, Josh, and Ashley somehow heard the screams and ran into the dorms looking for everyone. They came to Alexis’ room and saw here and Zane in there. “Zane, Alexis” Both turned around and their eyes were glowing red and had huge fangs. “What’s going on?” Cain said.
To Be Continued……
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Post by Mstrgmr on Apr 20, 2006 6:06:36 GMT -5
Awesome!
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Post by HoennMaster on Apr 23, 2006 0:07:20 GMT -5
Chapter 25 – Vampire Scheme (2)
Cain just stood there, staring at Zane & Alexis. “I see you’ve meet my new servants” someone said. “Who’s there!” Josh yelled. Stacy then appeared in the middle of the room. “Stacy?” everyone said confused. “Yes, I guess it is about time you’ll find out, I’m the third Shadow Trainer!” “No” Cain said in a shocked voice. “Soon I’ll turn everyone on the island into Vampires so that Mysticon can rule the world!” Cain looked outside and saw the sun starting to rise. Zane and Alexis started to freak out and ran out of the room. Cain, Josh, & Ashley ran after them following them into the basement storage where there were no windows. Zane and Alexis hissed at the three of them. All of a sudden a figure came out of the wall. “Who are you!” Cain demanded. “Vampira! Now my sweet Vampires retreat!” she said dragging Alexis and Zane into the dark hole on the wall. Cain tried to follow but it closed. When they went upstairs all the other students were disappearing too. “What happened!” Cain said. “Vampira has changed all of the Swampert students into Vampires!” Stacy said coming out of a room. “I’ll see you later!” she said disappearing. The next night Cain, Ashley, Josh, Jaden, & Xander went looking for all of the vampires. While walking through the forest they keep hearing a laugh that seemed to follow them. A purple circle then appeared on the ground and Vampira emerged out of it. “It’s you! Let all of the students go!” Josh said. “Fine, but only if you can beat two of my vampires in a double battle!” Vampira laughed. Cain and Xander steeped forward. “Now then, her are my choices!” Zane and Alexis appeared. “Now, not my brother!” Xander said. “Great, I have to battle the hot girl!” Cain said. “What!” Ashley said in an angry voice. “I mean Great, I have to battle the girl with the hot moves!” Cain said in a fake laugh. “Begin the battle, and if the two of you lose I’ll be turning you into Vampires as well!” Vampira laughed.” “Go Noctowl!” Alexis said. “Go Metagross!” Zane said. “Go Flareon!” Cain said. “Come on out Banette!” Xander said. “Noctowl use Confusion on Banette!” Alexis ordered. “Metagross use Meteor Mash on Flareon!” Zane commanded. The attacks came so fast that both Cain and Xander’s Pokémon were hit. Cain then had Flareon use Flamethrower on Metagross but Metagross deflected it with Iron Defense. Then Banette went after Noctowl throwing Shadow Ball after Shadow Ball. Alexis had Noctowl use Confusion, which sent Banette to the ground. “Noctowl use Foresight on Banette!” Alexis ordered. “Now we can attack with regular attacks!” Zane said “Now Metagross use Hyper Beam!” The Hyper Beam hit both Pokémon. “Now use Confusion Noctowl!” Alexis said. The attacks hit again. “This is hopeless” Cain said.
To Be Continued……
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Post by Mstrgmr on Apr 23, 2006 6:03:01 GMT -5
I can't wait for the next chapter!
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Post by HoennMaster on Apr 23, 2006 7:49:31 GMT -5
Glad your liking
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Post by HoennMaster on Apr 27, 2006 20:20:04 GMT -5
Chapter 26 – Vampire Scheme (3)
“How can we win this battle? Alexis and Zane are two of the best students here! It’s hopeless!” Cain said falling to his knees. “Don’t give up! We can win!” Xander said. “Metagross used Meteor Mash!” “Noctowl use Confusion!” “Banette use Will-o-Wisp!” Xander ordered. The little fireballs smacked into Noctowl. Then Banette used Shadow Ball on Metagross. “Flareon use Fire spin!” Cain commanded getting back on his feet. All of a sudden Cain noticed a small glare in the corner of his eye. “The sun’s rising, perfect!” he said “Flareon use Fire Blast on Metagross!” “Banette use Shadow Ball on Noctowl!” Metagross use Meteor Mash!” Zane ordered. “Noctowl Confusion!” Alexis added. “Banette Torment!” Xander said. Metagross and Noctowl just stopped. “What happened?” Ashley asked. “Torment stops your opponent from using the same attacks twice in a row” Jaden explained. Flareon and Banette used their attacks and knocked Noctowl and Metagross out. Vampira then took two blue crystals she had in her hand and smashed them onto the ground shattering them. Alexis and Zane fell to the ground. “Weaklings, now you’ll battle me!” she said throwing two pokeballs. A Dusclops and Haunter came out. “Haunter use Mean Look!” “Now our pokémon can’t escape!” Xander said. “Flareon use Flamethrower!” Cain ordered. “Dusclops Shadow Ball!” Vampira ordered. The Shadow Ball went right threw Flamethrower smacking into Flareon. “Banette use Thunder!” The attacked rained down stopping both pokémon in their tracks. “Haunter use Night Shade! Dusclops use Hyper Beam!” Vampira ordered. Banette took both attacks and didn’t have the energy to continue battling. “Return. Cain there’s no way to beat her!” Xander said. “True, she hasn’t shown any weakness’, but I just have to hold her off!” Cain said. “What?” Xander asked. Flareon used a Fire Spin to trap the two pokémon in fire. The glare in Cain’s eye started to grow bigger by the second. “It’s time to end this Vampira!” Cain laughed. “What!” she exclaimed. “You’ve been so busy battling me and trying to turn use into vampires that you didn’t take into account one of the things vampires hate! The Sun!” Cain said. Vampira looked over the cliff and saw the sun rise and shine on her. “NO!” she screamed as she slowly turned into dust. Haunter and Dusclops started to disappear too. “Vampira must have created them” Jaden said. Alexis and Zane slowly woke up. “What happened?” they questioned. “You wouldn’t believe it so no point in telling” Cain said. They watched the sunrise and eventually they all fell asleep by the trees. “Fools, I’ll get you back!” Stacy said disappearing.
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