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Post by Mstrgmr on Apr 3, 2006 16:59:47 GMT -5
Chapter 139
Pryce Cold (1)
We join our heroes as Brendan and Sarah have entered the Mahogany Gym to battle Pryce for their seventh badges.
"Hello again, are you ready for a 6 on 6 double battle?"
"You bet we are Pryce!" said Brendan.
"Ok, then go Seel and Jynx!"
"Go Wartortle!"
"Go Croconaw!"
"Seel start things off with Ice Beam on Wartortle, and Jynx, use Confusion on Croconaw!"
"Wartortle stop Ice Beam with Surf!" It froze the wave, and then it hit Seel, causing a lot of damage.
"Croconaw dodge Confusion and use Bite!" It did, and Jynx took a lot of damage.
"Now Wartortle."
"Croconaw."
"Double Hydro Pump!" they yelled together. Both attacks hit, causing Seel and Jynx to faint.
"Jynx and Seel are unable to battle!"
"Jynx, Seel, return! Go, Dewgong and Swinub!"
"Croconaw use Slash on Swinub!"
"Wartortle use Skull Bash on Dewgong!"
"Swinub stop Croconaw with Powder Snow, and Dewgong stop Wartortle with Aurora Beam!" Both attacks hit, and Wartortle and Croconaw were stopped. "Now Dewgong dive underwater, and Swinub use Earthquake!" They both did, and knocked out Wartortle and Croconaw.
"Wartortle and Croconaw are unable to battle!"
"Wartortle return, go Haunter!"
"Croconaw return, go Noctowl!"
"Dewgong use Water Gun on Haunter, and Swinub use Powder Snow on Noctowl!"
"Noctowl dodge!"
"You too Haunter!" They both did.
"Now Noctowl use Wing Attack on Swinub!"
"Swinub stop it with Powder Snow!" It did. "Now Dewgong Ice Beam!" Noctowl was out on the super effective hit.
"Noctowl is unable to battle!"
"Noctowl return, go Charizard!"
Will Brendan and Sarah be able to win, or will their dreams of winning the Johto League be stopped cold? Find out in the next chapter.
TO BE CONTINUED....
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Post by PokéMaster on Apr 3, 2006 21:23:06 GMT -5
Nice
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Post by HoennMaster on Apr 3, 2006 22:32:41 GMT -5
I agree very good, hope part 2 comes soon!
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Post by Mstrgmr on Apr 4, 2006 16:13:52 GMT -5
Chapter 140
Pryce Cold (2)
We join our heroes as Brendan and Sarah are in the middle of a gym battle in Mahogany City with Pryce. Pryce has his Dewgong and Swinub out, with two pokémon left. Sarah has her Haunter out, with one pokémon left, and Brendan has his Charizard out, with no pokémon left.
"Haunter attack Swinub with Shadow Ball!"
"Dewgong stop it with Aurora Beam!" It caused a huge, blinding explosion. "Now Swinub Powder Snow the entire field!" Charizard and Haunter were both hit.
"Charizard use Dragon Rage on Swinub!"
"Swinub dodge!" It tried, but couldn't, and was knocked out.
"Swinub is unable to battle!"
"Swinub return, go Walrein! Use Blizzard!"
"Charizard block it with Flamethrower!" The attack cancelled each other out.
"Now Haunter use Shadow Punch on Dewgong!" Dewgong was paying attention to the attacks collided, and was hit hard, and knocked out of the water.
"Now Charizard finish off Dewgong with Fire Blast!" Dewgong was out.
"Dewgong is unable to battle!"
"Dewgong return, go Piloswine!"
"Charizard use Fire Spin on Walrein!"
"Piloswine use Powder Snow to stop it!" It did. "Now Piloswine and Walrein, double Blizzard on Haunter!" Haunter was hit very hard, and was knocked out.
"Haunter is unable to battle!"
"Haunter return, go Cyndaquil!"
"Walrein hit Charizard with Water Gun!"
"Cyndaquil Smokescreen!" Walrein stopped, not knowing where Charizard was.
"Now Charizard Flamethrower!" It was above the Smokescreen with Cyndaquil on it's back, and the flames caused a huge Explosion, causing extreme damage to Walrein and Piloswine.
"Walrein, Piloswine, we have to take out that Charizard, so double Blizzard attack!" Charizard was knocked out of the air, and was knocked out.
"Charizard is unable to battle!"
"Charizard return! Sarah, you can do!"
"I know I can Brendan!"
"Walrein use Ice Ball!"
"Cyndaquil dodge!" It did.
"Keep using Ice Ball!"
"Keep dodging!" Cyndaquil did, but the Ice Balls kept getting bigger and bigger, and on the fifth one, Cyndaquil was caught in the air. "Use Flamethrower on the wall!" It flew away from the wall and the Ice Ball, and landed right next to Walrein. "Now use Flamethrower!" Being weak already, Walrein was out.
"Walrein is unable to battle!"
"Walrein return!" As he was doing that, Cyndaquil started glowing, and evolved into Quilava.
"Alright! My Cyndaquil evolved in to Quilava! Let's see what you can do Quilava, use Flame Wheel!"
"Piloswine stop it with Blizzard!" Quilava went right through, and knocked Piloswine out.
"Piloswine is unable to battle! The winners are Brendan and Sarah!"
"Congratulations! Here are your badges, and for your final badge, head to Blackthorn City."
"Thanks Pryce, good-bye!" They then started off for Blackthorn City.
TO BE CONTINUED....
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Post by PokéMaster on Apr 4, 2006 16:19:12 GMT -5
Awesome battle!
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Post by HoennMaster on Apr 4, 2006 21:39:19 GMT -5
Awesome Battle!
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Post by Mstrgmr on Apr 15, 2006 15:50:51 GMT -5
Chapter 141
The Ice Cave
We join our heroes as they aare outside of The Ice Cave, on their way to Blackthorn City. They were about to go in, but May's egg started shaking and cracking.
"May look, I think your egg is hatching!" said Brendan. Everyone then put their bags and eggs down, and stared at May's egg.
"I think it is too!" After waiting for another two minutes, a Bonsly came out of the egg. "Alright! My Egg hatched into a Bonsly!" While that was happening, nobody noticed that a Smoochum grabbed Sarah's Egg, and started walking into The Ice Cave.
"Hey that Smoochum has my egg!" Smoochum heard her, and sprinted into The Ice Cave.
"Let's go find it!" said Brendan. Everyone picked up their things, and ran after Smoochum. They looked for two hours, but couldn't find it, and they had reached the exit of The Ice Cave.
"I can't believe that Smoochum took my Egg! I might never see what Pokémon is inside!" Sarah started crying, and Brendan and May tried to comfort her, but it didn't work. Then Smoochum came out, and gave Sarah her egg. "Thanks Smoochum!" The Egg then started shaking and cracking like May's did, and it became a Togepi. "Yes! My Egg hatched into a Togepi!"
"That's great! We found your Egg, and it hatched!" said Brendan.
"I guess it's time for us to continue to Blackthorn City now." said May. They started leaving, and Smoochum ran in front of them. "What is it Smoochum?" Smoochum ran up to May and tapped on one of her PokéBalls. "Do you want to come with me?" Smoochum nodded happily. "Ok, here." She dropped a PokéBall on the ground, and Smoochum went inside. "Yes, I caught a Smoochum!" Before it teleported away, May had her Lapras teleport instead. They then started off toward Blackthorn City again.
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Post by HoennMaster on Apr 15, 2006 22:41:21 GMT -5
I thought they were going to hatch 3-5 chapters apart? or did you run of of time to do that before the Johto League?
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Post by Mstrgmr on Apr 16, 2006 6:05:43 GMT -5
I am running out of time, so I decided to have two hatch in the last chapter, I didn't want to have any hatch in the middle of the Johto League, it's only 5-8 chapters away, so this way, they could get trained and battle, because I am planning on all of them being in at least one battle
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Post by HoennMaster on Apr 16, 2006 11:45:31 GMT -5
Great minds think a like!
Spoilers:
In my fan-fic May will also catch a Smoochum, I've had it planned for a while so I'm not copying
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