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Post by PokéMaster on Aug 12, 2005 12:32:15 GMT -5
Your fanfic is coming along great.
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Post by Mstrgmr on Aug 12, 2005 13:17:59 GMT -5
Thanks!
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Post by Mstrgmr on Aug 12, 2005 17:31:41 GMT -5
Chapter 6.
How to Catch a Pokémon
Just as our heroes were entering Petalburg City, Brendan was thinking about his first gym battle and then realized that he may need two pokémon.
"Sarah we need to go back so I can catch a pokémon."
"Why didn't you catch one when we were out there?"
"I kind of don't know how to catch one."
"Well I can show you!"
"Really, thanks Sarah!"
Now they are out there and Sarah is showing Brendan how to catch a pokémon.
So all I have to do is weaken it and throw one of my pokeballs" said Brendan.
"Yep" answered Sarah.
"Ok, so go Treecko! Use Pound on that Ralts!"
"Brendan look out, it is using Confusion!'
"Treecko dodge and use Bullet Seed!"
"Now Brendan!"
"Pokéball go!" Ralts jiggled in the ball for a few seconds and then it stopped. "So did I catch it?"
"Yes you did, congratulations!"
"Thanks. Yes, I caught my first pokémon!" He says while doing a dance.
"Ready to go back to Petalburg?"
"Yes I am!"
TO BE CONTINUED....
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Post by Mstrgmr on Aug 13, 2005 9:18:11 GMT -5
Chapter 7.
The First Gym Battle
We join our heroes as they are in the Petalburg Pokémon Center waiting to go to their gym battle with Norman.
"Brendan are you nervous?" Asked Sarah.
"Just a little bit." answered Brendan.
Now our heroes are inside the gym waiting for Norman.
"You will never beat my dad" said Max, Norman's son.
"We'll see about that" said Sarah.
"Hello challengers" said Norman as he walked in. "So there are two of you. How about we battle 4 on 4? Each of you would use 2 pokémon each.
"Fine with us" said Brendan and Sarah together.
"Alright then, Go Slakoth and Vigoroth!"
"Go Treecko!"
"Go Taillow!"
"Slakoth and Vigoroth start with Scratch!"
"Treecko use Bullet Seed to stop Slakoth!"
"Taillow Dodge!" It gets hit. "Taillow no, use Peck on Slakoth!
"Slakoth is unable to battle!" Said the judge.
"Go Zigzagoon!"
"Vigoroth use Hyper Beam!"
"Treecko dodge!"
"Taillow dodge!" they both get hit, but only Treecko stands up.
"Taillow is unable to battle!"
"Go Beautifly!"
Will Brendan and Sarah be able to beat Norman? And where are they headed next. Find out in the next chapter.
TO BE CONTINUED....
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Post by Mstrgmr on Aug 14, 2005 10:03:54 GMT -5
Chapter 8.
The First Gym Battle(2)
We join join our heroes as they are in a 4 on 4 gym battle with Norman. One of Norman's pokémon is already knocked out. So is May's Taillow. Right now it is Brendan's Treecko and Sarah's Beutifly against Normna's Zigzagoon and Vigoroth.
"Treecko hit Vigoroth with Bullet Seed!" It did.
"Beautifly hit it with Silver Wind!"
"Vigoroth and Zigzagoon, Hyper Beam!" The attacks collide in midair and when the smoke cleared Treecko and Vigoroth are both knocked out.
"Treecko and Vigoroth are unable to battle!" said the judge.
"Treecko return, go Ralts!"
"Vigoroth return, go Slaking!"
"Ralts hit both with confusion!" It did.
"Now Beautifly hit Zigzagoon with Sleep Powder!"
"Zigzagoon stop Beautifly with Hyper Beam!"
"Beautifly dodge!"
"Now Slaking hit it with Hyper Beam!"
"Beautifly use Sleep Powder quick!" It got hit but got Sleep Powder off on Zigzagoon.
"Beautifly and Zigzagoon are unable to battle!"
"Beautifly return!" It's up to you Brendan.
"Zigzagoon return!"
"Slaking use Body Slam!"
"Ralts dodge and use Psybeam!" It didn't have an effect. "Oh no, it didn't work."
"Now Slaking finish it with your strongest Hyper Beam!"
"What am I going to do, it is too big to dodge." Brendan was thinking. "I got it!, Ralts use Psychic to push Hyper Beam back at Slaking!" Slaking hits the wall and is unable to get up.
"Slaking is unable to battle! The winners are Brendan and Sarah!"
"You did it Brendan!"
"For defeating me in battle, here are your badges."
"Wow, thanks Norman" said Brendan.
"Yeah!" said Sarah
"I believe the place you want to go next is Rustboro." said Norman.
"Ok"
After healing their pokémon at the Pokémon Center, Brendan and Sarah were off to Rustboro and their second badges.
TO BE CONTINUED....
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Post by Mstrgmr on Aug 15, 2005 8:39:12 GMT -5
Chapter 9
Lost in the Petalbrug Woods
After our heroes left Petalburg they started walking through the Petalburg Woods, but they got lost.
"Brendan where are we?" asked Sarah.
"I'll tell you when I figure that out" answered Brendan.
"YOU MEAN WE ARE LOST!!!!"
"Well, yes."
"Well it is a good thing I have a map."
While Sarah was looking at the map Brendan saw a wild Wurmple. "I am gonna catch it, go Ralts! Use Psybeam!" The unsuspecting Wurmple got hit hard and was knocked out. "Go Pokéball!" Wurmple wiggled for five seconds and then stopped. "Yes, I caught a Wurmple!"
"Ok Brendan, I found the way out."
"That's Great! By the way, I caught a Wurmple."
"That's awesome, Brendan, good job."
"Thanks!"
With that they started walking to Rustboro and got there, then started preparing for their gym battle.
TO BE CONTINUED....
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Post by Mstrgmr on Aug 16, 2005 15:56:00 GMT -5
Chapter 10.
The Rock Hard Gym Leader! Roxanne!
Our heroes had just finished at the Pokémon Center when a woman ran in carrying her pokéballs. "Nurse Joy will you please heal my pokémon" said the woman.
"Of course Roxanne, your pokémon need to be in tip top shape to fight at the gym" answered Nurse Joy.
"You are the gym leader?" asked Sarah.
"Yes I am, why do you ask?" answered Roxanne.
"We are in town to fight you." said Brendan.
"Well as soon as my pokémon are healed we can."
"Great!" answered Brendan and Sarah together.
About 20 minutes later they were ready to fight their gym battle with Roxanne. "This will be a 2 on 2 double battle with each of you using one pokémon each." said Roxanne.
"Fine with us, go Treecko! said Brendan
"Go Beautifly!" said Sarah.
"Go Nosepass and Geodude!" said Roxanne.
"Beautifly start with Silver Wind!"
"Nosepass hit it with Zap Cannon!" Beutifly got hit hard, but stayed in.
"Wow, that Nosepass can use Zap Cannon." said Brendan. "Sarah, distract it with another Silver Wind and I will come in and hit it with Bullet Seed."
"Ok, but you should use Absorb, not Bullet Seed.
"Ok."
"Geodude, Nosepass, Rock Throw!"
"Dodge!" Brendan and Sarah said together.
"Beautifly Silver Wind!
"Nosepass use Zap Cannon again!"
"Now Treecko, Absorb!" Beautifly was hit with the Zap Cannon and was knocked out, but Absorb did major damage to Nosepass.
"Beautifly is unable to battle!" said the judge.
"Better start fast then" thought Brendan. "Treecko use Bullet Seed on Geodude and Nosepass!" They were both hit hard, but only Nosepass wasn't knocked out.
"Geodude is unable to battle!"
"Nosepass, hit Treecko with Earthquake!"
"Treecko jump and use Absorb!" Treecko absorbed energy from Nosepass and was still hit by Earthquake. Both pokémon were down for a minute, but Treecko, using pure toughness stood up.
"Nosepass is unable to battle! The winners are Brendan and Sarah!"
"Great job, you have definetely earned this badge." said Roxanne.
"Thank you!" said Brendan and Sarah together.
"I believe you should head to Dewford Gym next."
"Ok"
After that Brendan and Sarah got their pokémon healed and started to head to the boat to Dewford Town.
TO BE CONTINUED....
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Post by Mstrgmr on Aug 17, 2005 7:17:25 GMT -5
Chapter 11
Mr. Briney and the Sea Cottage
We join our heroes as they are racing to catch the final ferry of the day to Dewford Town. They just missed it. "I told you we didn't have time for chili dogs!" said Sarah.
"Sorry" answered Brendan
"You kids looking to get to Dewford?" said an old man.
"Yeah, why?" answered Brendan
"I can take you there, my name is Mr. Briney, I was once a great sea captain, but now I just ferry people to Dewford and then to Slateport."
"Cool, could you take us to Dewford, then to Slateport?" said Sarah.
"Sure, all you have to do is show me your Pokémon."
"Ok, go Treecko, Ralts, and Wurmple!"
"Go, Taillow and Beautifly!"
"Brendan look! Your Wurmple is evolving! You must have caught one that was ready to evolve.
"Yes, my Wurmple evolved into a Cascoon!"
"Wow, that is amazing, I was going to have you two battle too, but seeing an evolution is a lot better. Are you ready to go?"
"Yes."
"I am."
"Well then let's go!"
So Brendan and Sarah set off for Dewford and their next gym battle.
TO BE CONTINUED....
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Post by Lit'l-Yellow-Fellow on Aug 17, 2005 11:14:12 GMT -5
I like it. Sarah`s a common name in all the fan fictions I`ve read lately. Especially the Pokemon ones.
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Post by Mstrgmr on Aug 17, 2005 11:17:21 GMT -5
That's weird, I just put that name because she is one of my friends.
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